Frogpond 31.2 • 2008

Museum of Haiku
Literature Award


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Book Review

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Marian Olson’s Desert Hours

DesertHours book coverReview of Marian Olson’s Desert Hours. Northfield, Massachusetts: Lily Pool Press, 2007. Art by Karen Fitzsimmons. Letterpress, sewn binding, 109 pages, ISBN 978-0-934714-35-8.

by Peter Yovu (Vermont)

Poetry, with a life of its own, may sometimes be attracted to words, but can never be captured by them. The poet wishes to participate in creation, in how the world is shaped, and in how she herself is shaped by the world. She knows that words are real and palpable, a means of making contact, without which the world is incomplete. By this love Marian Olson has allowed herself and her poems to be shaped by the high desert of the Sangre de Cristo mountains in New Mexico, by the impossible blooming of all that lives there, and by the mineral realities of death. They are not divided:

                              potter’s wheel
                              inside and out the shape
                              of her clay

Through intimacy with the contours of the land she inhabits, its moods, creatures, and fellow inhabitants present and past, and through a felt sense of the interrelatedness of these elements, Olson’s haiku both reveal and transcend the moment; they have a richness and depth, apparent in individual poems, but increasingly and variously revealed in relation to each other, in correspondences and subtle linkage. Often in Desert Hours, one poem, having left its impression, will ripple and re-emerge in another, and find new or different life there:

river’s song
a wounded turtle
slips into it

                              whole as the snakeskin surrender

What I wish to emphasize is the trust one can place in these discoveries: the connections are not random. Just as the high desert (and all of nature) reveals itself to the one who is willing to listen, a good book will teach us how to read.
Olson’s poems never feel forced; there is no need to search for underlying meaning—it simply is, unfolding with the inevitability of sunrise, and the shaping of a hawk’s wings. And so, whether or not she intended it, I feel not only the
potter’s wheel but some kind of mythic sun in this haiku and elsewhere:

                              summer thermal
                              a wheel of ravens
                              spins out of sight

Other readers, of course, will find other correspondences, but it will not be because the poems are so vague as to be about whatever the reader wishes, but that they are real enough to withstand multiple use.

Themes emerge like springs, and go back underground, to reemerge elsewhere. Emergence itself—awakening—is an important theme in this book, explored at times explicitly:

       deep in barn shadows
          the owl’s white face
                                                             out of nowhere
                                                             the sweetness of a rose
                                                             country graveyard

and at times implied:

                                             dark is dark
                                             a twig snaps
                                             in the arroyo

If Olson were a less mature, less assured writer, she likely would have settled on a first line more like: the dark, and written a good enough haiku, evocative of mystery. But to my imagination she has gone further, and the haiku, not losing any sense of mystery or drama, encompasses more than that, an acceptance of reality as it is, both sensible and unknowable.

Emergence and disappearance, like so many seeming opposites in these poems, play out together, as linked as the inside and outside of the potter’s clay:

winter sun
you choose to die
with a shrug

                                             twilight sun
                                             slips into another
                                             dark world

These then, are poems of great sensuality and spirituality. Inseparable.

                              if you love me
                                       come inside
                                                 morning glory

This may be seen as sexually explicit, and it is, but the spiritual longing is equally evident. As with “dark is dark,” it presents a fact, a realization: the beloved has a beautiful form, and dwells within. For me, this is one of several key poems in which Olson’s themes ring clearly and can be heard again and again in other poems, amplified, altered, surprising.

Here is another key poem:

                              the world having become
                              what it is
                              I plant a few bulbs

in which objectivity and subjectivity rest beautifully in one another’s arms, mutually shaping, mutually falling away. Marian Olson loves the sun-struck, moon-cooled world she inhabits, endlessly revealing itself, endlessly concealed. And when love is mature in its acceptance of reality, of the beloved, expression follows, words take shape, and poetry is helpless to resist.